No More Chocolate Milk!!!!! Aaliyah

“Ouch!” the child screamed as you put a shot in the child’s arm. Imagine you child getting diabetes from flavored milk. Crazy right? Such as chocolate milk. By the way schools shouldn’t serve chocolate milk for several reasons.

My first reason why schools shouldn’t serve chocolate milk is because chocolate milk haves more sugar than a soft drink. I know this because the Coco Cola company said,” A small container of chocolate milk has approximately 20% more sugar than soda.” As I realize that soda is a healthier drink than chocolate milk in a weird way. This proves that chocolate milk have more sugar than a soft drink.

Another reason why schools shouldn’t serve chocolate milk is because there is too much sugar. By this I mean schools are getting nearly two gallons of extra sugar each year. I know this because in the passage Chocolate Milk: More Harmful Than Healthful it states,  “When kids drink chocolate and strawberry milk everyday, they’re getting nearly two gallons of extra sugar each year.” This shows me that it’s really bad for you.

My final reason why schools shouldn’t serve chocolate milk is that it’s an out-of-control problem. I know this because in the passage Chocolate Milk: More Harmful that Healthful it states,” It’s an out-of-control problem.” This is important because kids are taking the risk to having diabetes. This prove that it’s an out-of-control problem.

These are the reasons why schools shouldn’t serve chocolate milk. After reading this essay do you want to see your child with diabetes, because of the school? Now I know you will say but it can be good for you. It could but kids can get diabetes and they’re getting extra sugar every year. Now I thought parents want kids to stay away from too much sugar, to get closer to it.

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2 thoughts on “No More Chocolate Milk!!!!! Aaliyah

  1. good job big sister keep up the great work
    I love your hook and supporting details on why we shouldn’t serve chocolate milk cx
    keep it up, I’m with you on this one Aaliyah
    love always and forever
    -Barbara~Parnell

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