Verenice Rodriguez- Galvan Colorado University

Dear person,

       Imagine a world with peace, no pain, no starvation, and no rudeness! Join the communityand you will see i am right. This world is too chaotic. It seemslike someone is breaking it into pieces. First of all, no one ever starves they only get hungry.”He was not starving, it pointed out. He was hungry.No one in the community was starving, had ever been starving, would ever be starving ,” this shows the community’s past, present, and future saying there will never be starvation. Second of all, no one braggs, nor says, nor does anythig rude. “No  one ever mentioned such things; it was not a rule, but it was considered rude to call attention to things that were unsettling or different about individuals,”this shows a good point about rudeness because then no one will get picked on, called names, nor get bullied. Last but not least, there is not much pain. “Yes you have scraped your knees in falls from your bicycle. Yes you have crushed your fingers in the door last year,” the text is showing pain from accidents, but not pain from war or diseases. I am glad if you join the community but the descision lies in your hands.

            Sincerely,

                             Verenice

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