Breonna Rael Chicago

     Dear, Camryn

               Imagine a place with no love, strict rules, and you don’t have your true family. You shouldn’t move to the communite             because life will be boring FOREVER.

       My first reason is there is no love in the communite. It states in the book “It’s just a pill and your stirlings are gone.” ( Striling is love.) Jones and all of the others  have to take a pill when they are 12 yaers old so they can’t  feel love.

       Next, they hane stirct rules. If you break one you will get relesed. on page two it qoutes ” depertally the piolet had been trying to make his way back before his error was noticed. Needless to say he will be relesed fromthe communite

        Last, you wont have yor true family .on page 12 it states “the year we got lily  we knew , of coues we had  our first female because we’d made our application and been aproved.” This qoute showes that lily wasn’t thire true child.

         In conclusiuonyou should nat move to the communite. you wouldn’d want a place that  has no love, strict rules, and you don’t have you true fammily. Chose wisly. 

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