The Water By:Bryan E.

First of all,The worst day of my life was a hot summer day I was with my aunt and cousins we went to the pool.My brother, Junior(cousin),and cousins were there .I was jealous of my cousin junior he was better then me at everything. I didn’t respect him.

Then,”splash”it was such a great jump.  Then the pool got so crowded where I was they were wearing tubes (big round floating circles).I couldn’t go up because

to be continued…

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